tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1252175094403576854.post5860350805694040459..comments2023-09-22T12:45:43.141-05:00Comments on Blue Max Studios: The Black Desert Primer Available Now!RocketDadhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05737339078433321350noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1252175094403576854.post-34620612674336660792011-12-03T16:46:56.499-06:002011-12-03T16:46:56.499-06:00Ray, gotta agree with the Marktheother - it will b...Ray, gotta agree with the Marktheother - it will benefit from additional eyes going over it (by now you should have gotten the e-mail). When you get closer to stitching it all together, you might want to contact Santiago @ rpg.net. He's a freelance writer with editing experience that BD could benefit from.Strannikhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16087783366276504178noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1252175094403576854.post-4134364987262803012011-12-03T07:05:22.302-06:002011-12-03T07:05:22.302-06:00Sorry about that...I'll fix it when I have a c...Sorry about that...I'll fix it when I have a chance. Once the improved PDF is uploaded, everybody should receive an announcement.<br /><br />Still, glad you like the setting!RocketDadhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05737339078433321350noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1252175094403576854.post-56026833425572821452011-12-03T02:00:12.160-06:002011-12-03T02:00:12.160-06:00Just read the whole thing, it's awesome!
How...Just read the whole thing, it's awesome! <br /><br />However there are some jarring typos. A few I can remember: PG.30, second sentence of first paragraph of 'Magnetic Sails' it says "fasted" instead of faster; PG.14 the first sentence it says "exhibitions" instead of expeditions. There are a few others, suffice it to say it could use a little bit more proof Marktheotherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02922963377133906990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1252175094403576854.post-54833990192978801772011-12-02T10:49:55.343-06:002011-12-02T10:49:55.343-06:00What? No GURPS? Or FATE?
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I kid. Fans have to d...What? No GURPS? Or FATE?<br />;-)<br />I kid. Fans have to do something.Strannikhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16087783366276504178noreply@blogger.com